Muse

[Malu]

I read your book of longing
That is all it took
Like a fish I'm dying
On a rusty hook
If I can breath I'm trying
Yes I want your look
It seems like I am lying
Stealing from your book

Good story, you were able to get some good descriptions in there in a short stanza that showed us the story. My only critique would be to add more, because I want to know the results and where you were going, because right now I'm interpreting several things and I'm not sure which one you intended haha.