09-20-2013, 11:15 AM
Death is my greatest fear,
Next to rejection from my peers.
I ingest my drug through my lungs,
My life passes by in black smoke.
Daily talk is just people speaking in tongues.
I'm so lonely I could choke,
My personality has submerged.
I'm being sucked down the black so deep,
I tried to breathe, I couldn't see, I urged,
I have no friends. I'm just a creep,
I imagine others like sheep.
Life is my greatest fear.
The reader should be able to tell that you wrote this on the fly-- as the words came to you - which is a great way to write ( but usually as a starting point - take a step back and look at it for what it is afterwards)
Out of curiosity-- Did you know what your first and last lines would be before you began to write?
Next to rejection from my peers.
I ingest my drug through my lungs,
My life passes by in black smoke.
Daily talk is just people speaking in tongues.
I'm so lonely I could choke,
My personality has submerged.
I'm being sucked down the black so deep,
I tried to breathe, I couldn't see, I urged,
I have no friends. I'm just a creep,
I imagine others like sheep.
Life is my greatest fear.
The reader should be able to tell that you wrote this on the fly-- as the words came to you - which is a great way to write ( but usually as a starting point - take a step back and look at it for what it is afterwards)
Out of curiosity-- Did you know what your first and last lines would be before you began to write?