What

[larkmowins]

Where
Will we go from here
Or there
Or whichever way we are
Facing our problems or
Running away from those
Who
Choose to influence us
To morph into a mold of
Society, a fungus growing
Into our brains and souls where
It changes us
Who we are
What we are until we are
Them
Those who only desire
Conformity of every living thing and
We must resist this disease and
The only cure is free thought and
Free action and
The expansion of
What is called
Our mind
To the collective mind
Collective consciousness
Of the universe and
Fuck the people who can’t
Accept this
Fuck the people who try
To keep us down
And we will stand strong and
Float away.
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First post, blah blah.
I wasn't sure where I was going when I wrote this, and I in no way consider myself a poet or anything like that. I just sometimes like to write for funsies.

[rowens]

Most revolutionists these days are just in it for the funsies, and to fuck the people that can't and the people who try.

[Malu]

Where
Will we go from here
Or there
Or whichever way we are
Facing our problems or
Running away from those
Who
Choose to influence us
To morph into a mold of
Society, a fungus growing
Into our brains and souls where
It changes us
Who we are
What we are until we are
Them
Those who only desire
Conformity of every living thing and
We must resist this disease and
The only cure is free thought and
Free action and
The expansion of
What is called
Our mind
To the collective mind
Collective consciousness
Of the universe and
Fuck the people who can’t
Accept this
Fuck the people who try
To keep us down
And we will stand strong and
Float away.
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First post, blah blah.
I wasn't sure where I was going when I wrote this, and I in no way consider myself a poet or anything like that. I just sometimes like to write for funsies.

Hey that's how I am with most of my poems too! Haha, great message, I particularly liked the the fungus and disease parts, good way to get that feeling into a more tangible understanding, my only critique would be to see more of that! Hope this helps

[gmartino]

I can see your intrigued by the idea of a collective consciousness - very cool
Nice job comparing societal constructs to a fungus - but remember there are good and bad types of fungi - Just like there are good and bad societal constructs.
Existence is all about the Yin and Yang - The acceptance of a whole and your holy place in it
True freedom is only the freedom of choice and we are all born with this freedom. Even though some choose to ignore it or are too stupid to realize it, and in not making a choice or rather, not realizing in certain instances that there is a choice to be made. A large majority of the population on the planet make the most detrimental and meaningful choice of all. The choice to conform, and the choice to give away the power that they were born with.

Don't stop writing. Don't stop thinking.