09-17-2013, 09:44 AM
Depths
Death is my greatest fear,
Next to rejection from my peers.
I ingest my drug through my lungs,
My life passes by in black smoke.
Daily talk is just people speaking in tongues.
I'm so lonely I could choke,
My personality has submerged.
I'm being sucked down the black so deep,
I tried to breathe, I couldn't see, I urged,
I have no friends. I'm just a creep,
I imagine others like sheep.
Life is my greatest fear.
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Death is my greatest fear,
Next to rejection from my peers.
I ingest my drug through my lungs,
My life passes by in black smoke.
Daily talk is just people speaking in tongues.
I'm so lonely I could choke,
My personality has submerged.
I'm being sucked down the black so deep,
I tried to breathe, I couldn't see, I urged,
I have no friends. I'm just a creep,
I imagine others like sheep.
Life is my greatest fear.
Critique it. Rate it. 1-10.