08-14-2013, 07:08 PM
Thanks kindly for taking the time to comment Leanne. Glad you could find it silly, funny, entertaining, meant for a bit of fun. I must say, I'm rather disappointed though. After a good 15minute Googling I still can't find Postman Pat theme in Gaelic 
further to that, I can't begin to imagine the horrors of a combined Michael Jackson and foreign (to me at least) language Postman Pat theme tune *shudder*
I will remember what you've said regarding syntax, makes sense. Rereading with that in mind there are many occurrences. I find it useful and quite like it in one instance:
Mike explodes from down below
His two left feet all on show
Two right feet his left did join
Teeth were bared toward the groin!
...however elsewhere largely unnecessary. Using your words, would a good rule of thumb be ensuring *I* am in charge of the rhyme (rather than 'the rhyme being in charge of me') make it more suitable? Provided of course it's used sparingly?
Many thanks and good luck with getting that tune out your head!
further to that, I can't begin to imagine the horrors of a combined Michael Jackson and foreign (to me at least) language Postman Pat theme tune *shudder*I will remember what you've said regarding syntax, makes sense. Rereading with that in mind there are many occurrences. I find it useful and quite like it in one instance:
Mike explodes from down below
His two left feet all on show
Two right feet his left did join
Teeth were bared toward the groin!
...however elsewhere largely unnecessary. Using your words, would a good rule of thumb be ensuring *I* am in charge of the rhyme (rather than 'the rhyme being in charge of me') make it more suitable? Provided of course it's used sparingly?
Many thanks and good luck with getting that tune out your head!