Instilled
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I'm going to have to agree, the poem was a little tough to read because of how it's written. Try to change it up a bit maybe. I like where you're going with it, I think it just needs a little bit of work.
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Instilled - by shepdog329 - 08-13-2013, 12:47 AM
RE: Instilled - by rowens - 08-13-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: Instilled - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-13-2013, 01:19 AM
RE: Instilled - by shepdog329 - 08-13-2013, 02:48 AM
RE: Instilled - by Volaticus - 08-13-2013, 11:12 AM
RE: Instilled - by TheWall0912 - 08-13-2013, 08:49 PM



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