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Below the Flesh

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06-02-2013, 01:39 PM

Ok, so what do you think of this change:

As little as it is, still an overdose.
It's true, the Blues defines me too.

What do you think of it now? If you think it still needs more changes to improve it let me know Smile

Thank you!

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Below the Flesh - by samneri - 06-02-2013, 12:23 AM

RE: Below the Flesh - by Catcherin - 06-02-2013, 04:30 AM

RE: Below the Flesh - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-02-2013, 05:06 AM

RE: Below the Flesh - by samneri - 06-02-2013, 05:38 AM

RE: Below the Flesh - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-02-2013, 06:44 AM

RE: Below the Flesh - by samneri - 06-02-2013, 01:39 PM

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