05-06-2013, 09:59 PM
Thanks AR, yes, there's more than one layer in this poem. I adore alliteration and will use it whenever I can.
Serge, thank you for the link, it is most interesting, it was very enlightening. I appreciate that. I have edited this by adding just one word so I did not bother to put out a revised copy. I am afraid I didn't follow the exact criteria but hope this is an improvement.
My best,
Heart
Serge, thank you for the link, it is most interesting, it was very enlightening. I appreciate that. I have edited this by adding just one word so I did not bother to put out a revised copy. I am afraid I didn't follow the exact criteria but hope this is an improvement.
My best,
Heart