War of Hearts
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Thanks AR, yes, there's more than one layer in this poem. I adore alliteration and will use it whenever I can.
Serge, thank you for the link, it is most interesting, it was very enlightening. I appreciate that. I have edited this by adding just one word so I did not bother to put out a revised copy. I am afraid I didn't follow the exact criteria but hope this is an improvement.
My best,
Heart
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War of Hearts - by Heartafire - 05-05-2013, 02:16 PM
RE: War of Hearts - by serge gurkski - 05-05-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: War of Hearts - by Heartafire - 05-05-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: War of Hearts - by serge gurkski - 05-06-2013, 04:51 AM
RE: War of Hearts - by Magpie - 05-06-2013, 01:19 PM
RE: War of Hearts - by serge gurkski - 05-06-2013, 04:34 PM
RE: War of Hearts - by Heartafire - 05-06-2013, 09:59 PM



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