05-05-2013, 12:07 PM
The phrasing is stiff, and tired. It's full of cliches, and the rhymes are forced. It contains not a shread of imagery, nor any device for the reader, aside from rhymes, which, as I said, are forced.
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Love and silence - by Misfortuneteller - 05-05-2013, 11:18 AM
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