05-05-2013, 02:19 AM
(05-04-2013, 07:17 AM)KICKBACK Wrote: To me this poem is about a man afraid, or weakened by a girl he loved. he's afraid to embrace the love he had, instead he resents it. the man wants to be alone. he thinks there's only one way, hopefully he loves it.wow...its like you peered into my soul. This is exactly how i was feeling when i wrote it. :O except this chick made me remember all the others b4 her...hence the 'forevers' part in the last line.
the last stanza makes it seem as if there's a glimmer of hope for the guy. that he will soon be able to see the exit sign and take the offramp. putting himself back out there, where the people are.