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She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse*
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04-23-2013, 06:34 AM
As far as critique goes, I don't think I have anymore to add. I just wanted to say that I really hope to see a revision of this poem sometime. I think you have a pretty original idea, it's full of emotion and I think this could be a strong poem, once trimmed and with some added images. Hope you'll keep writing
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She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse* - by EversoAnonymous - 04-22-2013, 04:35 AM
RE: She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse* - by billy - 04-22-2013, 07:32 AM
RE: She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse* - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-22-2013, 03:37 PM
RE: She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse* - by Todd - 04-22-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: She *Trigger Warning: Self Harm and Emotional Abuse* - by Volaticus - 04-23-2013, 06:34 AM
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