Transformation

[2onthemap]

I love the innocence connoted by the nature imagery in this poem! It is like a little tour of the seasons... I particularly enjoyed the line 'Rime in the morning light pervades' because it perfectly evokes the scene it's describing. Lovely!

Thanks for the feedback. I was beginning to lose hope in my poetic skills.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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I really love the tone of this poem. It's soothing and joyful. Quick suggestion - the third line doesn't quite scan, and possibly "summer scenes" would help with that, instead of "summer scenery"?

You right, that does sound better. I will make the change
I appreciate your feedback.