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03-26-2013, 12:29 PM

I found this piece to be adorable. The style was different. I'm not sure if I liked the use of exclamation points. I think it inadvertently interrupts the rhythm of the piece. But other than that, the way you turned rhymes was delightful Smile

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******MOTHER****** - by smjafrulhassan - 03-24-2013, 03:09 PM

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RE: ******MOTHER****** - by Tommy - 03-25-2013, 07:51 AM

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RE: ******MOTHER****** - by FragileHeart - 03-26-2013, 12:11 PM

RE: ******MOTHER****** - by allykat727 - 03-26-2013, 12:29 PM

RE: ******MOTHER****** - by Volaticus - 03-27-2013, 10:56 AM

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