******MOTHER******

[tectak]

Oh! mother

You are a sweet name.

Oh! mother

You are a sweet heart.

Oh! mother, you are

the life of baby.

Oh! mother,you are

My heart and hobby.

Oh! mother, you are

Always beauty and right.

Oh! mother,you are my

bright home light

Sorry, but this is just a childlike (not childish) eulogy. There is no poetry here. You have listed, with some difficulty, a series of adulatory statements. You found it difficult because once you have said "I love my mother" that really is about it.
Get off the teat and write something with the conviction that maturity brings. I am sure she is a wonderful woman (they nearly all are, except on the Jeremy Kyle Show) but this is just an emetic.
Again, apologies for the harshness but there us nothing of any merit in this....unless you think it's worthy to rhyme "are" with "are". I don't.
Best,
tectak
PS try reposting in novice where you will get help rather than crit. I only read this because it was languishing.