On Sparkly Eyeliner
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My first image was of a little girl playing dress up and marching around in the rain puddles in an act of childish defiance. (and I liked her) But, wow..she grew up fast and hard in the next few lines. Why do I still sense her, inside of the woman she shelters in? I think it may be the near tantrum proportions of the defiance, the unkempt anger and the need to justify herself with literary references. I still like her.
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On Sparkly Eyeliner - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by Leanne - 03-23-2013, 05:41 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 06:13 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by Leanne - 03-23-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by DoReMi - 03-23-2013, 06:31 AM
RE: On Sparkly Eyeliner - by tmanzano - 03-23-2013, 12:28 PM



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