Where true love lies

[softlyfalling]

The lie is left in air that cries
for breath. The truth has long ago
deserted you and I. The lies
we told, we did not know
(or you would say, not realise)
would see us part and go
our sepArate ways. How I surprise LEANNE SPOTTED THIS SPELLING MISHTAKE .Thanks, Leanne.
myself. I never thought to show
my love, when from your eyes
warm heartfelt tears would flow.
I told you not to care; despise
me for my truths, and I'll forego
whatever joy is left to me. Lies
brought us to this point and so
we hold our breath to see who dies
the first. It's always me, and though edit by seth. Thanks.
you smile, your heart denies
your every word; now we both know
the lies are caught in all your sighs
and hang there as I turn and go.
tectak
2013

deserted "I"??????????????????? Really??????????????

Hi softly, You haven't got the hang of this yet You are commenting on a pre-edited version. I incorporated your correction a week back snd credited you!
Thanks again again,
best,
tectak

LOLOL....OOPS

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The lie is left in air that cries
for breath. The truth has long ago
deserted you and I. The lies
we told, we did not know
(or you would say, not realise)
would see us part and go
our sepArate ways. How I surprise LEANNE SPOTTED THIS SPELLING MISHTAKE .Thanks, Leanne.
myself. I never thought to show
my love, when from your eyes
warm heartfelt tears would flow.
I told you not to care; despise
me for my truths, and I'll forego
whatever joy is left to me. Lies
brought us to this point and so
we hold our breath to see who dies
the first. It's always me, and though edit by seth. Thanks.
you smile, your heart denies
your every word; now we both know
the lies are caught in all your sighs
and hang there as I turn and go.
tectak
2013

deserted "I"??????????????????? Really??????????????

Hi softly, You haven't got the hang of this yet You are commenting on a pre-edited version. I incorporated your correction a week back snd credited you!
Thanks again again,
best,
tectak

LOLOL....OOPS

You have to admit, this page has a preponderance of words...it is a veritable blizzard.