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On the slab
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03-01-2013, 05:27 AM
Chilled rather than chill would form a link with equality or not just a suggestion, title could be seen as a cheat but this one adds to the poem's set up and since your not conforming anyway then who cares, I like it.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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On the slab - by escorial - 02-27-2013, 08:11 PM
RE: On the slab - by billy - 02-27-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: On the slab - by cidermaid - 02-28-2013, 03:07 AM
RE: On the slab - by Keith - 03-01-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: On the slab - by Jae Mc Donnell - 03-03-2013, 07:53 AM
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