Savana

[snower]

Fly away with speed
You steer with your strong tail
Kill another pray

[cidermaid]

Is it a cheatah?

Quick question: Did you mean prey as in a victim, rather than an offering / request of help to a god?

[snower]

Is it a cheatah?

Quick question: Did you mean prey as in a victim, rather than an offering / request of help to a god?

Yeah it is
Yeah I meant prey but to kill a pray or kill a request of help sounds good too.
thanks I can of need help from a critic

[billy]

savana would have been nice in the poem.

try and use a seasonal word if you can; just an example, you can redo it your own way. don't worry too much about 575 format.

savana sunshine
the tail steering the cheetah
time to prey