02-21-2013, 01:07 PM
Hello hobbit, what a great escape! Smiffy has some really sound advice for you and I don't think that I can add any more to that. I did a bit of a rewrite as I saw it, hope it's of some use to you, keep up the good work, cheers 
High above the clouds so white
He carries me, I hold on tight.
Free from sadness far below,
The real me, to him I show.
He flies me through my world of dreams
True happiness, in fields of green.
Safe upon his soft bay back
we gallop from those nightmares black
Too soon, its softly back to ground
Happiness, yet to be found.
Beside him I am safe and strong
In equine heaven we belong!
And should more shadows yet appear
His noble closeness eases fear
I quickly mount and grip his mane
Whence we fly.... to a world more sane

High above the clouds so white
He carries me, I hold on tight.
Free from sadness far below,
The real me, to him I show.
He flies me through my world of dreams
True happiness, in fields of green.
Safe upon his soft bay back
we gallop from those nightmares black
Too soon, its softly back to ground
Happiness, yet to be found.
Beside him I am safe and strong
In equine heaven we belong!
And should more shadows yet appear
His noble closeness eases fear
I quickly mount and grip his mane
Whence we fly.... to a world more sane
Oh what a wicket web we weave!

