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New Old Hat
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01-25-2013, 10:45 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. In particular, the build-up beginning in the second stanza and continuing until the end of the poem. In general, I feel a great deal of emotion through-out. The end of the second stanza confuses me a bit, I'm just not sure I understand; which could, admittedly, be my own failing.
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New Old Hat - by oligoclonal - 01-25-2013, 07:49 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by Leanne - 01-25-2013, 08:35 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by oligoclonal - 01-25-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by Mr. Shankly - 01-25-2013, 10:45 PM
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RE: New Old Hat - by Todd - 01-26-2013, 01:42 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by Pete Ak - 01-26-2013, 02:01 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by Leanne - 01-26-2013, 05:52 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by oligoclonal - 01-26-2013, 09:53 AM
RE: New Old Hat - by oligoclonal - 01-26-2013, 11:33 PM
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