Astralegies I Libra

[rowens]

Before you said you make mistakes with English sometimes: But then I like saying things in awkward ways; but then again, you said that you didn't like to do that. So when lines seem a little off like when you say "loosing" instead of 'losing', do you want me to point them out: even in the noncritique sections? To me they're all critique sections if people simply say what they see and think and feel.

And now I see this is addressed to somebody specific, so it's easier to get a feel for.