for the fun of it
#1
beware strong demonish German accent. ;-)))

serge's voice

text:

Dionysus I

The devil in me


Don’t come closer
Because I promise danger if you do.
You ask me why I smile?
Because I knew you’d give a shit on my warning.
So sit down, sip wine and listen
And now know this:
I used to be a peaceful man
Before I came to this place
But what attracts you now so fatally
Is just a mask,
That the demon has put on my face.
That demon’s name ‘s Dionysus,
The king of elegance and terror,
And I am his sparkling bait.
Help yourself with wine, please,
And while you’re at it,
Why don’t you take a cigarette from me.

It will somewhat ease your pain
On our fun ride…

She asked for the bathroom,
And while she was wasting
The last free minutes of her life,
I stood up and walked over to
One of the wonderful windows
Made of Butzenglas ,
And watched the landscape
(Through a Bull’s eye pane that is,)
Beyond the castle freeze in agony.
And suddenly the floating in of memories:
Bohemian Krumlov on a cold February day
In 1608… Gore at the castle…

But she returned
And I smiled her into comfort
So that she might find
Delight in the stories
I was to trap her with
Which went like this one,
Which was the first:
“One day past or future – it matters hardly -when
Dionysus tightens his grip on me once more-
He leads me in paths so wrongfully dark
Off the Bourgeois track
And through the snowy sideways of
A pretty city close to the Alps.
For you are with me in that valley of death
And I surely will dwell…
In that house of booze.
*
Amidst those present
-Gamblers not boozers btw
Except this one
Grayed-in-the-wool guy
Who’d stomp his left hoof
With annoying loudness on the floor-
Stood ostentatiously
Our landlady ,our barkeeperette
Body yummy, nose crooked though
(Though this being no obstacle)
But a plenitude of blond hair
Enough –to cut it short – to distract me
from keeping strict attention to my glass.
She would not take a drink
But as I applied this technique:
Pretend to be fascinated by whatever
She seems to find worthwhile to share
And be assured: her sweet little
Subconsciousness will tenderly start to vibrate for you…
Alas, she kept me from drinking seriously,
Which alone would have saved me
From committing what
Evades me now.
Because the rest of the night
Faded into a blur –a mere smear of time-
Sentiment-free
At least
Retrospectively.
And while taking the cab
Next noon to the next exhibition
Of … grandeur
And equipped most orderly with
Emotional painkillers
I – with earned concern - could not help to notify
Numerous police cars heading at
A place I could only
Faintly remember.

----* parody on psalm 23 (the Lord is my shepherd ...)
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#2
Thanks for this really enjoyed the audio...Vut accent?
Good to have the words as well, listened then read, having the words gave a second appreciation of the fine craft of this piece.
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#3
(01-11-2013, 04:44 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  Thanks for this really enjoyed the audio...Vut accent?
Good to have the words as well, listened then read, having the words gave a second appreciation of the fine craft of this piece.

like you liked,
ya vut? ;-) I warned anyone.

cheers serge


shhh
(I like cider. French cider and calvados of cours.))
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#4
so thats german Big Grin
i enjoyed it .

you can leave a link to your homepage in your signature
and have you tried uploading to kiwi6 it allows you to hotling and put your vocals here as an mp3...we're not keen on sending people off site to read or listen to postery Wink
moved it here to miscellaneous as members aren't allowed to start threads there. Smile
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#5
@ Billy: I will take kiwi6 next time. Hello Billy, doing fine) -)
upload it and then link it here, ok.

Thanks for enjoying it. Can you imagine it gets better on the phone? Ok, I know gals who d say no! ;-) But I insist. Ha!

@ cidermaid: forgot to mention I have 1 anecdote about drinking cider (no, slurpin it) from a barrell at my best friend's house, which I can't share in public. Or: not yet. Its too gross. ,-)

cheers
Serge
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#6
Oh, I should rather c/p my text here? i did not it first, Billy. Sorry. Will do that now.
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#7
Hey Serge,
I like that you included audio with this one, this would have to be my favorite so far from you. It shows creativity and you're writing capability effortlessly. Your voice is just an extension of that.

A very great read and not hard on the ears either.
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#8
I liked this too. The effect and the character of the reading. It takes me to that place, and I can travel with it.
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#9
thanks Arbil and Rowens for listening into this! cheers Serge
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