Biggun Burgers
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(01-12-2013, 07:38 AM)BennyBoy Wrote:  A few years ago I was on vacation thinking of Pulp Fiction and jingles and I wrote this.

Biggun Burgers

Biggun Burgers is the best
so much better than the rest

It's quite a place, there's nothing vile
we take your face, and make it smile

Scrumptios! Incredible!
It's! All! Edible!

Come on down, you've got nothing to lose
we serve all our food through toothpaste tubes

Mmm Mmm it's just so tasty
That's right I like it pasty!

Hear the noise of animal murders
they all scream "Eat Biggun Burgers!"
i thought it as funny as hell though i'm thinking that's not the intention. is it an anti meat poem or one that tries to show how meat is stripped off the bone in a particular way that not even the bone is wasted? would it be better as "we all eat..." on the last line?
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Biggun Burgers - by BennyBoy - 01-12-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by Leanne - 01-12-2013, 03:57 PM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by billy - 01-12-2013, 05:41 PM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 04:26 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 05:34 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by BennyBoy - 01-13-2013, 06:34 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by Leanne - 01-13-2013, 06:39 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by craigdaniels - 01-13-2013, 08:05 AM
RE: Biggun Burgers - by destiny1313 - 01-14-2013, 03:45 AM



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