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Eyes fluttered open
and peered around
A virgin girl
on virgin ground

Green earth below
damp and warm
first conceived
existence was born

Palms pushed down
she got to her feet
a vague remembrance
in her memory too deep
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feedback - by destiny1313 - 01-10-2013, 03:00 PM
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