01-09-2013, 10:13 AM
I’m drowning in three inches
of spit, 70 faces into one
mouth, and so few drops from
each.
best stanza you have, so much dept, so much hurt. i love it.
i'd say work on your vocabulary then work on your imagery theres so much more you can say with so fewer words.
of spit, 70 faces into one
mouth, and so few drops from
each.
best stanza you have, so much dept, so much hurt. i love it.
i'd say work on your vocabulary then work on your imagery theres so much more you can say with so fewer words.
Isn't It Evil to Live Backwards~Loaded Lux
I'm Batman, act up and I'll squeeze Hecklers/You'll die before the first clip drops, Heath Ledger!