01-02-2013, 09:23 AM
Welcome Gordon!
An intriguing poem. I've read it a few times and have no idea what it's about, I'm thinking romantic.
He will share with another
With him
He whom I am most convinced will never exist
A great last stanza that loops back to the first stanza..very well crafted.
The thing is this poem isn't very telling. Was that intended? I feel like I'm missing the point with this. It has a direct tone the comes out in an indirect way in my opinion, if that makes any sense.
Sorry that I'm not helpful.
An intriguing poem. I've read it a few times and have no idea what it's about, I'm thinking romantic.
He will share with another
With him
He whom I am most convinced will never exist
A great last stanza that loops back to the first stanza..very well crafted.
The thing is this poem isn't very telling. Was that intended? I feel like I'm missing the point with this. It has a direct tone the comes out in an indirect way in my opinion, if that makes any sense.
Sorry that I'm not helpful.