12-22-2012, 06:42 PM
it's worthy of a title, a title can add depth to a short poem. oh btw, hi and welcome 
ices makes it feel like there's more than one ice, a suggestion would be 'until the ice must melt' it's a solid short poem with lots of scope to be enlarged two nice snapshots. thanks for the read.
ices makes it feel like there's more than one ice, a suggestion would be 'until the ice must melt' it's a solid short poem with lots of scope to be enlarged two nice snapshots. thanks for the read.