12-02-2012, 10:44 AM
i thought about not giving us our coal instead of coals and then felt the ambiguity of taking that part out helped. i know some people in ireland get free coal or used to, but i haven't heard of it else where, i was wondering if people may have wondered what the line meant. if you meant leaving coal for santa then i'd rephrase it. at the end of day all i said are just suggestions. what do you think? read it a few times, with and without that part and decide what you prefer. 