In the void with you

[Aish]

In between the
Moon and land, I like the opening. It's like a lullaby

Between the infinite
stars and sand

Two travelled one, This line throws me. One what? One path? As one?
Hand in hand.


Somewhere between the
Land and moon Nice switch up without sounding repetitive.

You floated too, I'm not sure the switch between an ambiguity and a specific 'you' works, at least from my perspective.

In the space between the
Void and you, I do find this interesting, as the Void has many connotations and introduces a feeling of melancholia echoed in the final line.

One travelled two. Again, there is no concrete idea here. Two what?

Welcome to the Pig, Thomas. I think you have a very nice beginning here.