08-29-2012, 12:46 AM
The rhymes do limit this poem. New rhymes could produce something very different. You can try that. Or you can try another form.
And you can still tinker around with what you already have.
Something like:
Within this euphoric labyrinth, lost,
Wondering at the boundaries crossed.
Peering through a looking glass,
Inside its jagged shards I pass.
Purest light has filled my skin.
My own reflection shines within.
.....................
And you can still tinker around with what you already have.
Something like:
Within this euphoric labyrinth, lost,
Wondering at the boundaries crossed.
Peering through a looking glass,
Inside its jagged shards I pass.
Purest light has filled my skin.
My own reflection shines within.
.....................