08-03-2012, 01:17 AM
Divine Moments of Truth = DMT which is a hallucinogen, which is what the poem is about, definitely not getting stoned, haha. On the last two lines of stanza 1, the first line is me trying to explain what it feels like... It honestly feels like you are full of sunlight. Like glowing and pure. It's kind of hard to explain the inner feelings of tripping ;p The visuals are easier to talk about. And the final line of it is essentially me saying that you are being true to yourself rather then just acting out, but maybe it's phrased too clumsily. I'll probably give that part an edit.
Pleasantly is a good word for it though... Here I'm describing a different kind of tripping. It's a very mild anethetized sensation. It lacks excitement, but is like a deep contentment.
Thanks for all the suggestions, will take what you have said into consideration.
Pleasantly is a good word for it though... Here I'm describing a different kind of tripping. It's a very mild anethetized sensation. It lacks excitement, but is like a deep contentment.
Thanks for all the suggestions, will take what you have said into consideration.