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all ways to peace
look into
tomorrowland
this land of graves
its grieving parents -
praying for tomorrow
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this land of graves
its grieving parents -
praying for tomorrow
all land is full of bones
and every person grieves
tomorrow it's their turn
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all land is full of bones
and every person grieves
tomorrow it's their turn
bones and flesh and blood -
there's no glory in this land of ours
just soup
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Just soup, and you
and the food truck of faraway land -
I think we owe it still.
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Just soup, and you
and the food truck of faraway land -
I think we owe it still.
Don't you know, Steve?
It's hard to eat hot soup without
whistling, without
putting your lips together and
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Don't you know, Steve?
It's hard to eat hot soup without
whistling, without
putting your lips together and
coarsely rubbing
all the right places—
Lauren's voice
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coarsely rubbing
all the right places—
Lauren's voice
coarse fishing
in the wrong place-
it's a fine line
wae aye man ye radgie
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coarse fishing
in the wrong place-
it's a fine line
a sword's fine line
drawn from head to breast -
Toshiro Mifune
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a sword's fine line
drawn from head to breast -
Toshiro Mifune
Samurai -
you have drawn your sword so well
it's practically a wire.
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Samurai -
you have drawn your sword so well
it's practically a wire.
tightly drawn wires
vibrate— diamonds
sing across the lake
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tightly draw wires
vibrate— diamonds
sing across the lake
Diamonds sing
Neil's family
in harmony
A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.
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Diamonds sing
Neil's family
in harmony
puberty has never been so callous
your harmony sings only to your phallus -
Justin Bieber
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puberty has never been so callous
your harmony sings only to your phallus -
Justin Bieber
This Just in, making head-lines today - - Corduroy pillows
- Man who lost phallus also loses half a foot
- Bieber-mania reaches Grimsby
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Corduroy pillows
Man who lost phallus also loses half a foot
Bieber-mania reaches Grimsby
Grimsby Roylott -
phallus head kills nerd pop's new sensation-
The Spectacled Boyband.
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Grimsby Roylott -
phallus head kills nerd pop's new sensation-
The Spectacled Boyband.
The spectacled boyband
lip syncs Dostoyevsky over two chords -
horny teens get epilepsy.
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The spectacled boyband
lip syncs Dostoyevsky over two chords -
horny teens get epilepsy.
Spectacled Owl Dostoyevsky quit the band
when Spectacled Bear and Spectacled Caiman
switched to contact lenses
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switched lenses
not near sighted anymore
only short sighted
When the lighthouse lenses
needed cleaning, they switched
to flames and line-of-sight
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When the lighthouse lenses
needed cleaning, they switched
to flames and line-of-sight
lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
poor Archimedes
betrayed by Artemis
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lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
poor Archimedes
betrayed by Artemis
Him the huntress slew, a pity
but poorer they of that Assuwan city
levelled by Mighty Aphrodite.
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(11-29-2015, 01:25 PM)ronsaik Wrote: lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
poor Archimedes
betrayed by Artemis
Him the huntress slew, a pity
but poorer they of that Assuwan city
levelled by Mighty Aphrodite. To be picky: Since the Romans were doing the conquering, it wouldn't be Aphrodite but Venus.
And more picky: What's Aphrodite or Venus doing leveling a city (unless, somehow, it was leveled by
love... or some passion the Romans had for war??). If leveling was to be done by a Roman goddess,
it would be Artemis' Roman parallel: Diana. And hell, as long as we're going that far, I'd give credit to
the Roman god Mars. But that aside, I grant you 100 points for "Assuwan city". Esoteric you are dude!
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