Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)
    all ways to peace
    look into
    tomorrowland


    this land of graves
    its grieving parents -
    praying for tomorrow

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this land of graves
its grieving parents -
praying for tomorrow


all land is full of bones
and every person grieves
tomorrow it's their turn
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    all land is full of bones
    and every person grieves
    tomorrow it's their turn


    bones and flesh and blood -
    there's no glory in this land of ours
    just soup

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Just soup, and you
and the food truck of faraway land -
I think we owe it still.
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Just soup, and you
and the food truck of faraway land -
I think we owe it still.

Don't you know, Steve?
It's hard to eat hot soup without
whistling, without
putting your lips together and
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Don't you know, Steve?
It's hard to eat hot soup without
whistling, without
putting your lips together and

coarsely rubbing
all the right places—
Lauren's voice
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coarsely rubbing
all the right places—
Lauren's voice

coarse fishing
in the wrong place-
it's a fine line
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    coarse fishing
    in the wrong place-
    it's a fine line


    a sword's fine line
    drawn from head to breast -  
    Toshiro Mifune

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a sword's fine line
drawn from head to breast -
Toshiro Mifune

Samurai -
you have drawn your sword so well
it's practically a wire.
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Samurai -
you have drawn your sword so well
it's practically a wire.

tightly drawn wires
vibrate— diamonds
sing across the lake
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tightly draw wires
vibrate— diamonds
sing across the lake

Diamonds sing
Neil's family
in harmony
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    Diamonds sing
    Neil's family
    in harmony


    puberty has never been so callous
    your harmony sings only to your phallus -
    Justin Bieber

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puberty has never been so callous
your harmony sings only to your phallus - 
Justin Bieber

This Just in, making head-lines today -
  • Corduroy pillows
  • Man who lost phallus also loses half a foot
  • Bieber-mania reaches Grimsby
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Corduroy pillows
Man who lost phallus also loses half a foot
Bieber-mania reaches Grimsby

Grimsby Roylott -
phallus head kills nerd pop's new sensation-
The Spectacled Boyband.
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Grimsby Roylott -
phallus head kills nerd pop's new sensation-
The Spectacled Boyband.

The spectacled boyband
lip syncs Dostoyevsky over two chords -
horny teens get epilepsy.
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The spectacled boyband
lip syncs Dostoyevsky over two chords -
horny teens get epilepsy.

Spectacled Owl Dostoyevsky quit the band
when Spectacled Bear and Spectacled Caiman
switched to contact lenses
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switched lenses
not near sighted anymore
only short sighted

When the lighthouse lenses
needed cleaning, they switched
to flames and line-of-sight
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    When the lighthouse lenses
    needed cleaning, they switched
    to flames and line-of-sight


    lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
    poor Archimedes
    betrayed by Artemis

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lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
poor Archimedes
betrayed by Artemis

Him the huntress slew, a pity
but poorer they of that Assuwan city
levelled by Mighty Aphrodite.
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(11-29-2015, 01:25 PM)ronsaik Wrote:  lenses, flames, the siege of Syracuse -
poor Archimedes
betrayed by Artemis

Him the huntress slew, a pity
but poorer they of that Assuwan city
levelled by Mighty Aphrodite.

To be picky: Since the Romans were doing the conquering, it wouldn't be Aphrodite but Venus.
And more picky: What's Aphrodite or Venus doing leveling a city (unless, somehow, it was leveled by
love... or some passion the Romans had for war??). If leveling was to be done by a Roman goddess,
it would be Artemis' Roman parallel: Diana. And hell, as long as we're going that far, I'd give credit to
the Roman god Mars. But that aside, I grant you 100 points for "Assuwan city". Esoteric you are dude!
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