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"Bong!"
Said Zebberdee
and filled his springy lungs.
Ermintrude the eternal cow
grazed the roundabout's magic.
It pinged from udder to udder
like a demented pinball
Brian smeared himself
over green baize looking for Dylan
who was lazily taking a hit from the stupefied
jack-in-the-box that was still
wrecked from the night before.
"Fuck off"
said Dougal,
"unless you have some sugar."
i have no idea why i wrote this. i just had the urge to write, i got this so i put it into the funhouse. most people will have no idea who or what it's about
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It's about the cartoon, 'The Magic Carousel', ha ha... You begin with the Jack-in-the box popping awake. Then Emma's on the carousel getting an udderly wonderful vibra-massage. Brian the snail is out and slime-ing about. Dylan, the rabbit is here. Finally, Dougal is present with his insatiable sweet-tooth. This is fun, but I am certain it evokes fine memories for you! I really dig psychedelic stuff billy, cool... Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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(09-26-2013, 04:07 PM)billy Wrote: "Bong!"
Said Zebberdee
and filled his springy lungs.
Ermintrude the eternal cow
grazed the roundabout's magic.
It pinged from udder to udder
like a demented pinball
Brian smeared himself
over green baize looking for Dylan
who was lazily taking a hit from the stupefied
jack-in-the-box that was still
wrecked from the night before.
"Fuck off"
said Dougal,
"unless you have some sugar."
i have no idea why i wrote this. i just had the urge to write, i got this so i put it into the funhouse. most people will have no idea who or what it's about
"Bong!"
Said Zebberdee
and filled his springy lungs.
Class, I wish I had written these lines, reminded me of tea time, you could have been a script writer
. Nice one Billy
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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09-27-2013, 08:02 AM
(This post was last modified: 09-27-2013, 08:03 AM by billy.)
if i were a script writer i'd have liked it to have been for pron
thanks christopher
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I think "bong" pretty much tells you everything you need to know, although I always pictured you as a "roll your own" sort of guy Billy.
Dale
PS: I do like the part where you are blowing Jack's box.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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09-27-2013, 04:23 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-27-2013, 04:23 PM by billy.)
you must be psychic Dale
i hated using a bong, there was something pure about making a spliff
i even called my dog spliffy
