Moderated By: Quixilated, Tiger the Lion
Users browsing this forum: 246 Guest(s)

Basic Poet and Critic Forum Rules
Due to poets being overly eager to post poetry (too many poems at once)
A new rule exists; One Poem Per Day max in any or all of the following: Basic Critique, Mild to Moderate Critique Forum, and the Intensive Critique and Workshopping Forum.


Post here if:
- you are prepared to accept advice and suggestions to edit your poem
- you intend to spend time commenting -- in as much detail as you are able -- on the posts of other members
- you have left at least one piece of feedback on someone elses poem for every poem you post

This is the Basic Forum, please ensure that comments provides valuable feedback to the poet, even if it's all positive. A simple "I like this" is not appropriate Please comment to the best of your ability.

All posts should be directly related to criticism/analysis/improvement of the original post, the poem. From time to time it is expected that a discussion will arise from a point made in a comment. If it becomes apparent that comments are addressing other comments rather than the original post, a moderator will either move these posts to a new discussion thread in Poetry Discussion -- or for more robust discussion, to The Pig's Arse -- or, if necessary, the moderator will ask that further comments cease altogether. If, as the originator of a thread, you feel that your poem has been "hijacked" or that discussion has moved in a direction you are uncomfortable with, please send a PM to one of the moderators of this forum. It is not appropriate to engage in argument in a Critique forum.

Not all poets will have the same amount of knowledge or experience. Be as supportive and encouraging as you can without giving only empty praise.

Don't take any negative feedback personally -- use it to improve.

If you are writing a comment, please ensure that it shows you've read the poem by mentioning something specific, even if it's only "I like this line/ metaphor/ rhyme because..." A generic "I like this poem" or "wow that's amazing" really isn't helpful and will be pointed out as such by a mod.

Basic critique
Thread / Author [asc] Replies Views Last Post
Forum Announcements
    Giving And Getting Feedback And Critique - Or doing an edit of your poetry. (a must read) - - 09-01-2011, 10:39 AM
Normal Threads
   
Go to first unread post A loss poem
fx12002
4 1,623 02-23-2013, 05:24 AM
Last Post: rowens
    5 2,044 02-16-2018, 08:26 AM
Last Post: poetkitten
   
Go to first unread post Absence
FutureProof
1 1,125 05-18-2013, 08:52 AM
Last Post: rowens
   
Go to first unread post Drifting Away
FutureProof
16 6,810 12-14-2014, 03:59 PM
Last Post: Dymun Fengshui
   
Go to first unread post Money Owed
FSF29
2 1,601 09-20-2013, 02:54 AM
Last Post: Malu
   
Go to first unread post intrusion
friedmouse420
4 1,725 08-06-2013, 07:33 PM
Last Post: qwerty_H
    4 2,698 10-14-2021, 07:12 AM
Last Post: FrenchToast
    2 1,457 10-15-2021, 07:51 AM
Last Post: Tiger the Lion
    8 3,563 09-03-2021, 12:13 AM
Last Post: SPOKENDAWORD
   
Go to first unread post Operation: Filth Removal
Frankie Ocean
4 1,985 08-17-2012, 01:26 PM
Last Post: Philatone
    5 3,026 05-09-2013, 11:19 AM
Last Post: Sam33lynn
    4 1,971 05-07-2013, 01:05 AM
Last Post: fourtimefelon
    4 1,957 05-13-2013, 06:03 AM
Last Post: qwerty_H
   
Go to first unread post Storm Magic
FountainPen97
3 1,501 05-20-2017, 01:56 AM
Last Post: nibbed
    4 1,603 08-09-2019, 11:46 AM
Last Post: billy
   
Go to first unread post The Valley
flowergirl23
8 3,180 07-03-2013, 10:11 AM
Last Post: billy
    11 2,999 03-24-2017, 01:55 PM
Last Post: glennerdwilliams
    6 1,910 03-26-2017, 12:36 AM
Last Post: Graca
    16 4,444 03-27-2018, 03:37 PM
Last Post: kaos
    5 2,414 03-09-2022, 06:23 AM
Last Post: Semicircle


  1 new thread
  Hot Thread (New)
  Hot Thread (No New)
  No New Posts
  Contains Posts by You
 


Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!