< the unbroken wholeness of the universe (bout 23) >
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< the unbroken wholeness of the universe (bout 23) >

the cat's asleep
on my lap
all warm
and cuddly

but i really
REALLY!
need to pee

on
my
lap
all
warm
and
cuddly

.
.
.

i pee in my pants

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Photo is "Yang-Yin" by Philip Yang

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(05-08-2013, 12:06 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  



[Image: catlap.jpg]



< the unbroken wholeness of the universe (bout 23) >

the cat's asleep
on my lap
all warm
and cuddly

but i really
REALLY!
need to pee

on
my
lap
all
warm
and
cuddly

.
.
.

i pee in my pants

- - -



Photo is "Yang-Yin" by Philip Yang


I love this ray, the things we will do for these little pets of ours. Someone should be so kind to us, :-))
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(05-08-2013, 12:13 AM)Heartafire Wrote:  I love this ray, the things we will do for these little pets of ours. Someone should be so kind to us, :-))

In any decent universe there'd be this benevolent, loving god who would fulfill this requirement.
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(05-08-2013, 01:44 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
(05-08-2013, 12:13 AM)Heartafire Wrote:  I love this ray, the things we will do for these little pets of ours. Someone should be so kind to us, :-))

In any decent universe there'd be this benevolent, loving god who would fulfill this requirement.

A lovely thought ray! We can indeed judge a society by how it treats its animals (quote).
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So many times I been in that situation (well, almost). I think it's a wonderful little poem, and a witty and warm tribute to pets.
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(05-08-2013, 12:06 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  



[Image: catlap.jpg]



< the unbroken wholeness of the universe (bout 23) >

the cat's asleep
on my lap
all warm
and cuddly

but i really
REALLY!
need to pee

on
my
lap
all
warm
and
cuddly

.
.
.

i pee in my pants

- - -



Photo is "Yang-Yin" by Philip Yang

you sad bastard. addy's the same way with cats, they're the centre of her universe. as usual it's well worth the read. brevity the cat.
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#7
Good poem, Ray, almost as lovely as the kitty in the pictureBig Grin I like the contrast between the warmness of the cat and the warmness running down your narrator's leg!
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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(05-08-2013, 10:15 PM)Heslopian Wrote:  Good poem, Ray, almost as lovely as the kitty in the pictureBig Grin I like the contrast between the warmness of the cat and the warmness running down your narrator's leg!
That ole "thesis-> antithesis-> synthesis" works its majic once again. Smile
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i showed it addy and she just smiled and swooned Smile
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(05-09-2013, 03:26 PM)billy Wrote:  i showed it addy and she just smiled and swooned Smile

Yes. Cats, it seems, have become my life as well.
Pathetic, but satisfying (especially on cold mornings).

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Call me a pansy if you want, but I love cats! Although I haven't gone this far, (to anybody's knowledge) I can see the character's struggle and sympathize.
"Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again." - C.S. Lewis
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(05-16-2013, 07:48 AM)C.M.C. Wrote:  Call me a pansy if you want, but I love cats! Although I haven't gone this far, (to anybody's knowledge) I can see the character's struggle and sympathize.

Except, evidently, homosexual cats.

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