I Need Help!!!

[phada360]

The Cry of a Champion that was!

There is a promise that was made
A dream that was giving birth to
A vision that was once clear for all to see
... And an assurance that I leaned upon

There is a hope that once glittered in darkness
Faith that never said a word but assured
There was once a voice that echoed eternally
An inner cheer that doused the grief from outward fury

There was a strength that looked so dependable
A shield I could run to for cover
An armor of defence against all tribulation
... Once there was a champion that resided inside of me

But now...
All that is left is thorns threatening the sprout of hope that lies
As the symbol of passion in me seems to be slipping away
My strength seems like feathers
And courage to face tomorrow shivers in doubt

I need help...
Lest I self-destruct
I need just one wing...
Lest I remain grounded here eternally
I need air...
Only so I could breathe again
And come alive from this comatose

Life seems to have taken its toll on me
And that's y I cry so hard for help
Lest I remain here forever
~Composed by Phada'Official

[Leanne]

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[The Beef]

I think this can apply to most anyone at some point in time and I love how it shows that we're all susceptible to some woe throughout our lives. I'll be sharing this with my friends.

[phada360]

Thanks @theBeef... Its applicable to everybody at some point in life