FAKE
#1
Another poem for you guys enjoy Blush

We are supposed to be one not two,
You’re supposed to call me babe and I’m supposed to call you boo.
But we know it’s not working,
We are not even regularly talking.
Yet were supposed to be a “couple”,
When I see you my heart is supposed to be racing double.
You are supposed to capture this heart of mine,
And I’m supposed to captures yours with a matter of time.
But this is fake this was arranged,
They made us go on dates, they even got us engaged.
Our “love” and “marriage” is just strictly business,
You’re supposed to be the actor and I’m supposed to be the actress.
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#2
I liked the progression of intensity in this piece. It started out with lighter concepts and ended with the hardcore truth. My favorite lines were "They made us go on dates, they even got us engaged./Our “love” and “marriage” is just strictly business". Good write!
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#3
Thanks alot much appreciated Blush
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