When Shadows Dance

[Todd]

That was really good. It felt like something I might read in a book to get children interested in verse. The topic though was fun for adults. I love the boldness of the shadow, and how the roles were reversed between the two.

Really well done.

[lavashine]

I, too, enjoyed the role reversal - I love a good twist at the end of a poem! I felt that the poem flowed very well. Next time I see my shadow, I'll look at it a little differently I think.

[serge gurkski]

I like this too. It is fine. To me maybe it is more sweet than funny.

But this was a fine read.
Thank you

serge

[Shailenza]

This poem made great use of personification of the Shadow and gave the view of the love story through the view of an inanimate object. Good Job!

-Shailen Naick

[hobbit86]

I love this...such a clever and wonderfully happy poem. Put a smile on my face after a long shift thanks for a cheerful and heartwarming read