Pain Release

[Arriedo]

untouchable but able to be spoken to
teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me
how to handle it
love? lust?
or just infatuation....
around the boys i claim its fabrication
throw that 5 up claim the mac for every flag and nation
tell em my hearts crap its kind of useless
but if you slow the bar down you'll see i really said
my heart's crap it's kind of used less
it's a confused mess

i think about her and the heart breaks
but she's the method to my madness
the reason for me breathing
the love i'll never have again
even though i never had her once.....

[arbil_poieo]

Very sad, but I like how it's written and how you approached this. With the narrator having some pride, but yet regretful with pain.

"teasingly stroking me without laying a hand on me"---a lovely image that paints a clear picture of love but confusion.

[newsclippings]

I think everything was beautifully written, shy of the last line.