a xmassy tanka
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Christmas day child born
To save the world from our sin
Greedy ears are deaf
Power mad shout "crucify"
Hammer and nails still echo
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This really puts things into perspective. We know the holidays are about family and traditions, but it's also about Christ and I think we sometimes forget about that.

"Hammer and nails still echo" is humbling and has some emotional impact.

Very touching tanka
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