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Christmas day child born
To save the world from our sin
Greedy ears are deaf
Power mad shout "crucify"
Hammer and nails still echo
This really puts things into perspective. We know the holidays are about family and traditions, but it's also about Christ and I think we sometimes forget about that.

"Hammer and nails still echo" is humbling and has some emotional impact.

Very touching tanka