me 2nd tanka

[TwistedAngel]

I like me hatred
That's keeping me warm inside
Most days, stays sleeping
Oh how bright the days it wakes
Glorious technicolour

[cidermaid]

Hi TA
Quick pause while I went and checked out the rules for a Tanka !

Not sure if allowed or meant to have a title, but either way your's works well enough without.
Well for a start you seam to have kept to the rules / guidlines.
I appreciated the slightly dark honesty and humour in this one and felt that the lines gathered strength and momentum as they progressed with a great finish line.

Good stuff, thanks for the read. I like.

[billy]

it sounds like you live for the fireworks