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I've posted a thread, wonder what was said
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Peom was for me, dont care what they see
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It's dropped of the list, it's gonna get missed
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This is gettin silly, not even an I'll be back from Billy
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I've only got this one thread, that 64 fuckers have read
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Ok it's officially shite man, not even starwars, write I can
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I would just like to say, Ive only checked 112 times today
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Shrink says let it go, but what the fuck would he know
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Hooray, Dave from Newcastle thinks its top shelf, Its a pity I'm Dave and I wrote too myself. 
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Excellent! Creative all along the line, and great punch-line.
Plenty of mis-spellings -slips of the pen. Or if not, do let me know what a peom is.. Well, not plenty ---L.7 from bottom should be '' it's ''.
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(11-17-2012, 09:45 AM)abu nuwas Wrote: Excellent! Creative all along the line, and great punch-line.
Plenty of mis-spellings -slips of the pen. Or if not, do let me know what a peom is.. Well, not plenty ---L.7 from bottom should be '' it's ''.
You can tell Miss Spelling Peom is the sound a Poem makes when it's typed too fast  Ive changed the apostles (thanks) but Peom stays, because I like the sound.
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Whinging Poms, the world's full of 'em :p
We've all been there... write you must anyway...
It could be worse
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you fuckwit 
if it does ever happen and it will, give it a day or two and repost it 
thanks for the laugh
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This was creative and clever. Every post deserves attention so I'm sorry yours didn't, but it's good you turned it around and made it comical.
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it made me laugh, so sad it so honestly depicts the current state of most forums. LETS MAKE THIS NOT LIKE YOUR POEM!
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Funny as hell. Well done.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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the shrink line is clever as well as funny ;D
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Lol! laughed so hard, I scared the pedestrians. Nice. Very clever and original! Love it!
Favorite Line(s): "I've only got this one thread, that 64 fuckers have read Replies 0" and the last one
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Don't be that impatient. We'll come back to you.
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(01-05-2013, 12:36 AM)WtheTiger Wrote: Just joined this site, and I couldn't sum up the feeling better of posting my "masterpiece" and getting no feedback! Super creative, I dig this Thanks for your comment, I would like to stress that this was only written in jest, the members of this site do a fantastic job of making sure poems are not missed. Sometimes it happens  but thankfully its not the Norm. Keep posting or repost especially if you believe it to be a masterpiece.
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Oh gosh this is so funny. Well what I do (and I'm sure many others as well) is that I go to all 3 critique forums, and look at the number of replies. The ones that I read first are always the 0 replies ones. Then I try my best to give some form of feedback. Sometimes though, I just simply don't know where to start with a poem, and move on to others, hoping that the more talented people here will pitch in sooner or later.
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(01-05-2013, 11:47 AM)TBMDS Wrote: Nice way to catch the eye with the title...bit of reverse psychology
Ah you have worked my out, hey look it worked, what can I say 
(01-05-2013, 01:57 AM)brandontoh Wrote: Oh gosh this is so funny. Well what I do (and I'm sure many others as well) is that I go to all 3 critique forums, and look at the number of replies. The ones that I read first are always the 0 replies ones. Then I try my best to give some form of feedback. Sometimes though, I just simply don't know where to start with a poem, and move on to others, hoping that the more talented people here will pitch in sooner or later.
Me too when I have the time, thanks for your comment TOMH
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