11-04-2012, 09:31 AM
we all have a cross to bare
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Martial
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11-05-2012, 02:11 AM
I really like the revision, Leanne.
As a whole the piece is striking and thoughtful, but the second strophe is flat out haunting. I say "Publish that bitch"! If you haven't already, that is. 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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