It never rains...
#1
It never rained on Thursday.
My dog just upped and died.
It never rained on Thursday
'cos he always stayed inside.

It never rained on Tuesday
My sister upped and died.
It never rained on Tuesday
'cos she always stayed inside.
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#2
I don't know if this is your intention, but that poem struck me as really, really eerie. In a good way.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#3
i have no idea why i wrote it Sad
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#4
Very creep :c
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#5
what can i say...it was raining when i wrote it Big Grin
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