< and at this hour of our perfect honesty >

< and at this hour of our perfect honesty >
  O Leanne, my muse, please aid me now!
  me sitting 
  you insisting 
  what i said 
  now dead

  picture in us
  constructed of us 

  packed with all that old us there
  us captured in our stuttering consonantal
  all of us in all our gruntal cuntal puntal duntal

  chirping chipping chomping 
  me aping you 
  you aping uncle
  us so primal 
  us posthuntal 
  yes it's us
  now horizuntal

  tiger learning night-paced
  jumble of our sights-raced
  here we are in full-faced

  "we're wed"

  "we're dead"  (it's what you said)

  that picture of us
  glued back
  our picture perfects false fact 
  racked sacked jacked hacked backed lacked 

  pancakes mornings syrups

  "we're wed"

  that old us there 
  that old us at this hour of our perfect honesty  

  us vacuum empties night-laced
  us neatly glued-up back waste
  us here again on slant-paced




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Inspired by Leanne's beautiful (if humbly named) "Metamorphoses".

Adding additional tragic love poems* would please me no end.
And, really, any other comment you'd like to make would be most welcome.

P.S. Since it's gotten springish, i(I) think it only proper to load up
our deeply broken-hearted guns of love.

*even tragic love haiku, but NO, repeat NO, tragic love tanka!
almost terse
The idea -- to have fun-sum-cum
(hum-bum, bun-drum)
with words that rhyme-grime
(slime-time, brine-dime)
at the complete expense-tense
of making any sense-prints
(dense pretense).
As it does naught-halt for me-he,
I guess I'll fleeeeeeeee
(bee-flea, cee-sea).

How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
I am delighted, Ray, delighted I say Big Grin... "posthuntal" indeed!

in your spring
my flowers fade, leaves
give up their branches
and summer climbs into its
record of the year that was

how many miles does it take
to change a season?

I am summer in your
photographs, you
are frozen in mine

why smile when we
will be here for only
an instant?
It could be worse

< instantly >

we touch
on the fine horizon
and then
on our hollow bodies
a fine resonance
i play on yours
not suspecting it's mine
play together
you on me
me on you
one after the other
first you
then me

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almost terse

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