Lost but not forgotten

[ckeo]

Your eyes still haunt, peering at nothing
feeling everything.
I did not know how to rescue you from the chasm,
you would not reach out, it consumed you.
turbulent thoughts wavering with the frailty of thread
a voiceless cry, a weeping willow
whispering.. against the wind.

[addy]

Very creepy. The personal connection with the POV just enhanced the unsettling mood. Nicely done

[Wildcard]

I likey! Kinda like Sleepy Hollow meets Cliffhanger

[only rob]

Well finished. It hangs like an echo.

[silver_lining]

haunting...and sad.