The Heslop Clan
#1
I suppose what I hate most about
the Heslop clan (save the fact
that we're not rich) are our simple minded ways,
claw hammer like resolve, the kind of brute stupidity
only the British would call guts.

When faced with madness, suicide,
mostly wrought by my dad's wives,
our answer is to scrub the bath
and make tiny sandwiches.

Nanny P, the lady don,
with her long accrued wisdom,
passes judgement on the bitch
who dared to be depressed,
and openly insults my mum.

But she's not evil, simply dull
to the feelings of the meek,
and any outsider who dares
to infiltrate her chintz gangland.

We're working class, blue collar types
who like to say we're mannered, prim,
grim survivors who still know
how to hold a butter knife.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#2
hehe,

to infiltrate her chintz gangland.
don granny Big Grin

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#3
Yes, the chintz gangland --- but how do you hold a butter-knife? Danged if I know!
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#4
When faced with madness, suicide,
mostly wrought by my dad's wives,
our answer is to scrub the bath
and make tiny sandwiches.

This verse really caught my eye - it encapsulates a whole way of life Mind you, I might have put 'cucumber' between 'tiny' and 'sandwiches'........'cos that is my stereotypical view of the middle classes.
It made me wonder what I would chose for a working class family.
"our answer is to do the lottery
And have a Friday fry up."

Are 'wives' and 'sandwiches' what is called 'eye rhymes'? - something makes those particular lines satisfying to me!
grannyjill
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#5
It is beyond me to critique such fine wording. It does read lot like a story. I like that, but I wonder if that's because it's personal.
Thanks for sharing Jack. Sorry I couldn't be of more help Smile
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