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"Dancing night."

"Dancing night."
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#1
04-09-2011, 02:35 AM
A goddess Night,
A bright velvet darkness,
A flock of the nightmares
Bunched in a wreath.
Tried on. Then sighed sadly
And started a leisurely dance.
Inside of empty, deep black
Mirrors of people' sleeping
Minds ...
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addy Offline
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#2
04-09-2011, 02:37 PM
Something very, very haunting about this, even the way you ended it. Dark, lovely, and eerie.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#3
04-10-2011, 08:51 AM
i'm with addy on this one ris,
it has an ethereal quality about it.
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#4
04-14-2011, 02:30 PM
Hi, friends!
Thanks a lot for interesting and kind comments!
R.Y.
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